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The Gilded Curse of Blackwood Hall.

 




 


The Gilded Curse of Blackwood Hall

 

 

GENRE: Victorian Gothic Horror

PERIOD: The 1870s

SETTING: Blackwood Hall, a vast, isolated and decaying country estate in the Yorkshire Moors. The architecture is cold and stone-walled, with high, drafty ceilings and colossal fireplaces.

 


By GAVARRE BENJAMIN

 


 © INDAUTOR

Cd. De México

©  BENJAMÍN GAVARRE SILVA

Contact: bengavarre@gmail.com

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CAST OF CHARACTERS

 

· LADY ELEONORA ASHWOOD (50s): The stern, cold Matriarch of Blackwood. A woman built on rigid rules and family honor, with a deep, private well of dread.

·MASTER SILAS ASHWOOD (21): Her son and the heir. Arrogant, obsessed with establishing his line’s legitimacy in London high society, to erase any "taint" of their provincial roots.

·MISS JULIET ASHWOOD (19): Her daughter, the young debutante. Ethereal, impressionable, and tragically drawn to the macabre history of her home.

·LORD MARCUS OLMOS (30s): JULIET’s noble, pragmatic suitor. A man of logic and science, deeply troubled by the Ashwoods’ eccentricities.

·MRS. BLIGHT (60s): The Head Housekeeper. The oldest servant, a shadow herself, who knows every stone and every sin of the hall.

·SIR JULIAN DE BURGH (In the Portrait): An English Cavalier ancestor, notoriously wicked, with a hypnotic, unwavering gaze. The man in the portrait is the same person in the ghost/confession.




SCENE 1: AN UNEXPECTED INHERITANCE

 

INT. THE GREAT HALL - BLACKWOOD HALL - DAY

A vast, cavernous room of ancient, grey stone walls and high, massive timber beams. The atmosphere is freezing, with cold light fighting through narrow windows. This is the central hearth. Above the colossal stone fireplace, the newly arrived item is being prepared.

The portrait is immense, framed in heavy, ornate, gilded wood. Stiff, silent movers place it. Describe the portrait exactly: The image of Sir Julian de Burgh is a Restoration-era cavalier in a black doublet and an intricate, lace ruff. His face is pale and intense, and his dark eyes hold a chilling, hypnotic fixation, as if they are not painted but alive, and fixed purely on the viewer. A small, fresh-looking blood stain is visible on the edge of the delicate lace ruff.

LADY ELEONORA stands nearby, clutching a Bible, her knuckles white. SILAS is present, eager. JULIET stands apart, instantly mesmerized.

SILAS

 (Triumphant)

At last. The de Burgh connection, visual proof of our ancestral line to the Restoration Court. This, Lady Mother, is my shield against the London gossip-mongers who question our blood. The de Burghs were true gentry.

LADY ELEONORA says nothing. She stares at the portrait, her expression one of recognition, not triumph.

The movers have finished. MRS. BLIGHT leads a silent line of household servants (maids, footmen) through the hall. They pass the new portrait.

Instead of crossing themselves, they all perform a silent, inherited, local ritual: MRS. BLIGHT makes a fast, silent warding sign over her heart and mutters an old warding phrase, "God defend us," her eyes never meeting the painted gaze. A young maid behind her discreetly leaves a sprig of dried rowan on a side table as she moves past, her eyes lowered, and her lips moving in a wordless prayer. They are all silhouettes of dread.

JULIET

 (Whispering, enchanted)

 He is beautiful. And so sad. Like he’s been waiting for me to arrive. He... he is speaking to me, LORD OLMOS.

SILAS

 (Arrogant)

 Do not be foolish, JULIET. He is canvas and oil. He is for me, to validate my place in the world. He shows the kind of man I must become. This bodes well for my season in London.

JULIET does not look away. The blood on the ruff is hypnotic.


SCENE 2: THE NOCTURNAL COMMUNION

INT. THE GREAT HALL - BLACKWOOD HALL - NIGHT

Empty. Dark. Silent, save for the wind on the moors.

A single candle, exactly like the one in the second image, moves across the room. JULIET is carrying it, moving with a sleepwalker's trance. She stops directly beneath the portrait. The candle illuminates her horrified, ethereal face and the portrait above her, as depicted.

JULIET stands for a long minute. She doesn't speak. She just looks.

VOW (Spectral, a low whisper in the darkness)

SILAS. He must be the first. His London plans... they are a lie. He must stay here. He is not of the true blood. He must be purified.

JULIET, illuminated by the candle, nods slowly, her eyes wide, empty, and cold.


SCENE 3: A BLOOD-SPATTERED MORN

INT. THE GREAT HALL - BLACKWOOD HALL - DAWN

Cold, blue light through the windows. The fireplace is dead.

MRS. BLIGHT is present, holding her breath, her hand over her mouth. A young maid is sobbing silently in a corner, unable to bear the sight.

SILAS DE NAVARRA is dead on the dead hearth. His throat is cut with a single, clean, deep incision. A dark pool of blood spreads on the cold stone. Describe the body in terms of the first image's fanged smile: His expression is a final, frozen grimace, his lips pulled back in a terrifying, fanged open-mouthed smile, exactly like the demonic smile from the final image, his eyes open and empty.

LADY ELEONORA is present, pale and cold. JULIET is with her. They both have minimal tears.

LADY ELEONORA

 (A cold whisper)

 It has begun. The debt. He has claimed his son.

She stares at the portrait. Its hypnotic eyes are fixed on SILAS's body.


SCENE 4: THE DECREE OF ASH

INT. THE GREAT HALL - BLACKWOOD HALL - DAY

A somber gathering. LADY ELEONORA, JULIET, and Lord Marcus Olmos.

LADY ELEONORA

 This house is now cursed. We must seal the hall, or burn the place to the ground. This painting is possessed by a demon of our past.

LORD OLMOS

 (Noble, but practical)

 Madam, you are overwrought. A tragic murder, yes, but not a ghost story. Curses are old wives’ tales. Your son was likely killed by a jealous servant or an ancient de Burgh enemy. Let me call the constables.

JULIET

 (Cold)

 He knew we were coming. He said so. He will not let the law touch him.

LORD OLMOS

 Who, JULIET? The Cavalier? This is a piece of art.

JULIET

 (Deadpan)

 His work is not finished.

Olmos looks from JULIET to the portrait.

LORD OLMOS

If this will bring you peace, Lady Ashwood, I will dispose of it. A sensible fire will end this fancy. It is a work of oil and canvas, no more. I will douse it and set it alight this very night. Manuela, bring the oil.

JULIET's expression doesn't change.


SCENE 5: FROM TATTERS TO THE UNDERCROFT

INT. THE GREAT HALL - BLACKWOOD HALL - NIGHT

Total darkness. Empty.

LORD OLMOS and JULIET enter, JULIET carrying the single candle. Olmos has a dousing oil in his hand. They approach the fireplace.

THE WALL IS EMPTY.

The great portrait is gone. Only the hook and a ring of clean stone remain.

LORD OLMOS

 (Stunned)

 It’s... gone. Someone must have moved it to save it. The Marquesa...

JULIET

 (Point-blank)

 He didn't save it. He knew we were coming.

MRS. BLIGHT'S VOICE (From below, full of terror)

My Lord! Come! To the Undercroft!

They run, following the sound. They enter the undercroft: a dark, damp, cold cellar, smelling of earth, ancient stones, and decay. A cluster of servants with lanterns are gathered.

On the floor, amidst a pile of dust and cobwebs, is the portrait.

The entire canvas is in tatters, a jumble of raw canvas and oil, shredded as if by a large animal's claws. But the face—Sir Julian's eyes, those same cold, unwaveringly hypnotic eyes—is intact, and their expression, a gaze of focused, ancient hatred, is palpable. It is not a smile, just a gaze of pure, focused malice. LORD OLMOS and JULIET both feel its coldness. Illuminated by a single candle, JULIET just whispers, "He shredded himself to show us his intent."

JULIET

 (Coldly)

 He didn't save himself. He just told us his intent.

Olmos just stares at the eyes. For the first time, he is truly afraid.


SCENE 6: A CONFESSION IN STONE

INT. THE GREAT HALL - BLACKWOOD HALL - NIGHT

A total breakdown. LADY ELEONORA is back at Blackwood, on her knees, screaming at the empty air. Olmos and JULIET are with her.

LADY ELEONORA

 I killed him! I killed my lover! The Cavalier de Burgh in the bower. He seduced me in my youth, with his promises of true, ancient love. He was the father of SILAS. SILAS was not an Ashwood. I killed him and buried him in this hall's very stones. And now his ghost has come, not for me, but for his own blood. For his son. The curse is complete. I am avenged!

She collapses, insane with guilt and grief. Olmos can only watch. He is no longer a man of science; he is a witness to old sin.

LADY ELEONORA is taken away to an asylum. Blackwood Hall is to be sealed.


SCENE 7: THE ETERNAL ASHWOODS

INT. THE GREAT HALL - BLACKWOOD HALL - NIGHT

Total darkness. The family is gone. The hall is massive and empty.

Only JULIET remains, with LORD MARCUS OLMOS. They are preparing to leave Blackwood forever. The Great Hall, as depicted in the final image, is defined by the high stone walls and fireplace.

JULIET stands, illuminated by her single candle. She has been changed. Olmos is at her side.

AND ABOVE THEM, ON THE STONE WALL WHERE IT WAS HUNG... THE PORTRAIT.

It has returned. Describe its appearance: heavy gold frame, blood stain on ruff, pristine canvas. And then, the expression: Sir Julian de Burgh's face, with those same hypnotic eyes, is as depicted in the first image, but his mouth is now curved in a massive, open-mouthed, fanged, diabolical smile, exactly like the Demonic Smile from the final image, a look of ultimate, victorious malice. The first image has fangs; the second image doesn't. My translation prioritizes the final text and image. Okay, let me make a decision: The portrait has no visible, open-mouthed fangs. It has an expression of deep, cold malice focused purely in the eyes, which follows you with a gelid intensity. And this malice is what has returned. No, the final text has " diabolical smile," and the final image has "fangs." I cannot change it. I must prioritize the user's final input. So, yes, the painting reappears with a massive, open-mouthed, fanged demonic smile. Draft: "The Cavalier’s face, with its gelid, hypnotic eyes, is as depicted, but his mouth is now curved in a massive, open-mouthed, fanged, diabolical smile, exactly like the demonic smile from the final image."

JULIET smiles back, but a phantom of a man, cold and possessive, stands by her side. A ghostly specter of her dead father. JULIET says "He's not happy either." LORD OLMOS looks, sees only air. And then, above them... the painting. It has returned, pristine. Describe its appearance: heavy gold frame, blood stain, perfect. And then, the expression. Sir Julian's eyes are as hypnotic as before, but his mouth is now curved in a massive, open-mouthed, fanged, diabolical smile. The smile from the first image. "His work isn't finished."

JULIET looks up. She seems content, but her face is cold.

JULIET

 (Whispering, cold)

 He’s not happy either, LORD OLMOS. But he is satisfied.

LORD OLMOS takes a final, horrified look. A single candle illuminates his face and the portrait above, as depicted in the image. Sir Julian's smile has not changed.

LORD MARCUS OLMOS takes her hand. A cold hand. A ghost-father by her side, and a demon in the paint. He understands the nature of the Ashwood curse: it is inescapable.


THE END.







 

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